Flogging the Quill

I sent the first two chapters of my novel to www.floggingthequill.com to get flogged. I wonder how many days it will be till it is posted?

I’ve read and tweaked the first 16 lines several time. I like it, but I don’t know if it is page turn worthy. The first page is a journal entry, so it will have to be really strong to get Ray to turn the page. It is not a flashy action scene, but it does set the scene and foreshadows some of the problems that are coming.

The waiting is going to be tough.